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Pretty noose hanging in front of me
Pretty noose will you have this last dance
Pretty noose I hate how I’m seduced by your beauty
Pretty noose you’re my bad romance

Pretty noose I’m so hung up on you
Pretty noose you can take my pain away
Pretty noose this dance has been long overdo
Pretty noose back n forth we sway

Pretty noose please stop haunting my mind
Pretty noose I’m intoxicated by the thought of you
Pretty noose we’ve become intertwined
Pretty noose I don’t want to continue

Pretty noose leave me alone
Pretty noose my pain I don’t even know how to convey
Pretty noose promise me minimal pain is caused over my gravestone
Pretty noose this dance is over now take me away
Pretty noose
guys dont worry im okay i was just in a bad spot when this was written comments and favs are always appreciated 
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just so you guys know after i put this next poem up im okay so dont freak out after you read it thank you love you all
What do you do when you look inside yourself and find nothing
When the person you are is disconnected from the skin you’re wearing
When you try to find what’s not right and you realize it’s everything
Feeling your bones ever more hallowing

They say when you die the person you are,your soul leaves you
That makes me breathing but dead
So internally scarred by your mind that you can see them as soon as you pull up those sleeves
Maybe you’ll finally feel yourself on a deathbed

Or maybe you’re just buried in these vices
Is the person you were gone forever
If so oh how death entices
Because I’m so tired of being the survivor

Whatever happened to you you just don’t know
So go back to what you know best
The addictions and you what a sad duo
So for now I’ll just lay and hope this gets better after I rest
Disconnected
comments are always appriciated 
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so i do have anew poem for you guys but my submission thing isnt working right now -_-
  • Mood: Mad
  • Listening to: im a disaster- Ghost town
  • Reading: tumblr posts
  • Drinking: dr pepper
ive abanded this ivebeen extremlybusybuti still love all of youand i promise promise promise for some new poemes thank you all
  • Mood: Emotional
  • Listening to: Brand New- Jesus Christ
  • Reading: my poem book
  • Drinking: dr pepper
so i do have anew poem for you guys but my submission thing isnt working right now -_-
  • Mood: Mad
  • Listening to: im a disaster- Ghost town
  • Reading: tumblr posts
  • Drinking: dr pepper

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CrazyWave23HD Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
You has Good Taste in music! <3
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breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014   Writer
aw why thank you
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Your welcome love!
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mmmhmm of course
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breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013   Writer
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